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You saw me,
Broken under the tree.
I sat alone,
Trying to be my own person.
Trying to live without a crutch.
But I guess you looked through me,
And saw the broken little girl I am.

I wish you hadn't scooped me up.
I wish you hadn't started caring for me.
I wish I hadn't cared for you.

You saw me cry.
You didn't know how much baggage I carried.
What I had,
You could never deal with.
The baggage I carry,
Needs someone to be around all the time.

I've been neglected.
Ive been lied to.
Ive been left out on the street to fend for myself.
Ive been left to fight other peoples battles.

I just want to be my own person.
I want to not hurt anymore.
So please,
If you see me sitting under that tree,
Alone.
Don't come up,
And try to save me.
You would be trying to win a losing battle.
I dunno how to describe this.
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ive been there and it didnt end well
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LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Yeah it happens.
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:icongothchick913:
gothchick913 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yea i know
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Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this explains me and my friend,
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
Haha. Same with mine. Except we're not friends anymore.
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Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw, well im sorry. im very close with my friend,it sucks to loose friends.
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Ya it does. But it happens...
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:iconblissfull-thinking:
Blissfull-Thinking Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i know, but it still sucks
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Agreed.
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missq1959 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Deep true words spoken about pain ans being alone its amazing friend well done! !!
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconkilluaxme:
killuaxme Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
this is a good poem i really like it =)
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
thanks a lot :)
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:iconkilluaxme:
killuaxme Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
you are welcome =)
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:iconfaerie-punk:
faerie-punk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is goes deep!
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
thanks :)
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:iconfaerie-punk:
faerie-punk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem^^
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xBlackAlicex Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely! :) and I think your ID of a turtle is absalutely adorable :D
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
Thanks, and haha glad you like it :)
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TheMADGrimReaper Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
thanks :)
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:iconthemadgrimreaper:
TheMADGrimReaper Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome darlin ~
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shadowsmokeandfire Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really poetic.
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:iconlovingdestiny:
LovingDestiny Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
thanks :)
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